Comment on some article

I decided to review about article ‘Barriers’ by Logan Schrock on her blog. It is an essay about the barriers between amateur and professional writers. It also discusses about the barriers preventing students or amateur authors engaging in public discourse. Logan has expressed her views very clearly in her article. She has not only talked about her strong points about writing, but also about her flaws in writing.
In the first paragraph of her article, Logan talks about the challenges she faces while writing. She has very effectively written the paragraph giving her essay a strong introduction. This has not only given her an impressive introduction, but has also attracted readers towards her essay.
In the next paragraph, Logan writes about amateur writers and professional writers. She understandably explains this difference by giving example of her mother. She talks about her mom who is an excellent writer. But, due to circumstances she can’t write in public as other professional writers can, though she is equally as good as them. She explained the barriers between professional writers and amateur writers by giving example and explaining this fact more clearly.
I would like to conclude that though Logan points her flaws in writing, she is a good writer who has really innovative ideas to express herself. While others have explained the barriers between professional and amateur writers though either statistical facts or by reasoning, Logan explained this by giving example which I think is better way to explain her point of view.

Here is the link to Logan Schrock's article 'Barriers'
http://lschrockpurdueedu.blogspot.com/